Your pitch was presented effectively using
slides to outline ideas. You communicate well as a team and seem to have
developed roles within the group.
I like the idea of an interrogation and it
offers opportunities to explore lighting and mise en scene in a short scene.
One concern was how this would be a short film
as it reflects the tropes of dram on TV. However, you explained how this
would be overcome effectively. Ideas
such as use of colour sound interesting, make these clear. Your answers revealed a depth of thought
about the narrative which allayed any fears about the genre and medium.
Be realistic about where you film this. It
is ambitious to use the library and keep e-mail communication to show
planning.
Why use a Go Pro? Explain what different cameras bring to the
style of the piece.
Can you publish a first draft of the script
on the blog?
Comment on audience feedback received as part
of the pitch. You will need this later for the evaluation.
Outline the roles allocated within the
group.
After doing our pitch and gaining feedback, we decided to keep with our genre of crime-thriller, but lean away from the interrogation idea because of how it reflects more of a TV drama rather than a short film. Even though we knew how to overcome this, we would still have run into difficulties with keeping within the time frame allowed
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