Your web-log needs some attention as the last posts was 8th October. Dkeep up the regular posts and esnure all reserach and planning is now published.
Your short film has a clear progression of shots and the bars are
effective in giving it a cinematic look. Shots are of a good quality and
framing and composition are proficient showing excellent technical
skill in use of the camera. Audio has been considered and a JVC camera
has been used which shows ambition and an ability to use a more advanced
camera.
Music is appropriate and builds tension ass
does the length of shots. Feedback may indicate that shots are lengthy
but this suits the style of the short film.
Music is copyright free as it is sourced from Incomputech so make this clear in your web-log or put it in the credits.
Document your creative journey
I don't think you need to overdub sound but maybe add some ambient sounds or effects.
The
narrative is clear. Make sure that the story is not cliched. Be
original and think of a twist at the end or defy expectations. I am
intrigued as to how you will resolve the narrative. this is the key to
level 4.
Since this, I have added more posts for research and planning, including role allocation and production schedule.
ReplyDeleteNeed to state copyright information for music. We need to re-evaluate the ending of the film.