- The title music doesn't fade quick enough.
- There are issues with volume in some places.
- One of the cuts is delayed and needs editing.
- A few shots need to be reshot.
- When showing on the projector, lighting is an issue (this is fine on the Mac screen).
- Sound effects need to be added.
- Narrative may not be clear because ending still needs to be filmed.
- How does it fit the Thriller genre?
- What do you think is the narrative?
- What is your opinion on the colour correction?
- How does the soundtrack create a mood/atmosphere?
- What would be the audience for our short film in your opinion?
- Where would you expect our short film to be shown?
- What do you think of the pace of the film?
- What is your opinion of our aspect ratio of 16:9 to 2.39:1?
- What dialogue (if any) is needed to add to narrative?
- Can you suggest any issues with lighting?
Audience Feedback
Medal: Good range of shots
Effective use of sound
Mission: Make narrative more clear, perhaps have more speech
more shots of the antagonist
Medal: Good use of camera angles such as over the shoulder and establishing/ wide angled shots.
Mission: Include some extreme close ups to show the protagonist's facial expressions.
Have a clearer narrative. Level 3
Medal: Suspense built well
Follows thriller conventions
Mission: Adjust brightness/contrast in premiere.
More/clearer dialogue
Move away from horror themes
Medal: Good camera shots
Good use of lighting effect
Mission: make narrative more clear
more dialogue
Medal: Really good camera work and good location used
Mission: I thought the music didn't relate to what was going on. I was also unsure of the
genre. Level 3
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