Task 10: Audience Feedback on Print Products

Self Review of Print Products:

Poster 1:

• This idea is our preferred poster idea.
• Still need to get the photographs to edit for final product.
• Writing is too dark.
• Text font isn't appropriate.
• The blending of the mask into the head is effective.

Poster 2:

• The blend is better than anticipated.
• There could be some issues with the facial proportions.
• Too simplistic.
• Taking the photographs could be difficult.

Magazine Review 1:

• All basic elements are included.
• Bold layout.
• Relevant information included.
• Images will need to be revised.
• Possibly need text across the two pages.
• repetition of "IN CINEMAS" is unnecessary.
• Colour scheme needs to be revised.

Magazine Review 2:

• Better text layout.
• Images still need to be revised.
• Added in new section ("Director's Interview").
• Better colour scheme.
• Could add in image of poster when completed.
• Added social media platforms.
• Layout of page is better/more professional.

Audience Feedback:

1. Which poster design do you prefer?
2. Which review design do you prefer?
3. Why did you choose these designs?
4. What could still be improved on your chosen poster design?
5. What could still be improved on your chosen review design?
6. What images would fit best in the review?
7. How could the re-positioning of elements improve the appearance of the film poster?

Please leave your answers as a comment on this blog post, Thank You.

Task 10: Editing the Confrontation

Filming the fight scene was probably the most challenging part of the overall short film. This is because we needed to ensure that it was fast paced to create tension and emulate the emotions that would go through the character during a fight. One way we did this is by speeding up the clips slightly. This allowed for the impact to look more severe and added to the intensity of the scene. We had to make sure we only sped it up slightly because if the percentage was over 120% the footage started to look choppy. One way we could have overcome this was to film in 60 frames per second, however we were unsure whether the JVC camera had this ability. Fortunately, only a small percentage increase was required so the overall affect was successful in my opinion.

Task 10: Filming - Final Shots

We filmed the final shots of the film but found lots of the clips too dark. I tried adding a luma corrector to try and solve this problem and it did to an extent, but added a grain to the footage. I will need to discuss with the group whether we will reshoot the shots but it is difficult as the area is one that has little light and we need to note the continuity with previous shots before adding artificial light. In terms of the content of the shots, we felt it was successful, particularly the attempt to emulate police lights shining on the protagonists face.

Task 10: Audience Feedback on First Draft

Self Review on First Cut:

• The title music doesn't fade quick enough.
• There are issues with volume in some places.
• One of the cuts is delayed and needs editing.
• A few shots need to be reshot.
• When showing on the projector, lighting is an issue (this is fine on the Mac screen).
• Sound effects need to be added.
• Narrative may not be clear because ending still needs to be filmed.

Questions for Audience Feedback:

1. How does it fit the Thriller genre?
2. What do you think is the narrative?
3. What is your opinion on the colour correction?
4. How does the soundtrack create a mood/atmosphere?
5. What would be the audience for our short film in your opinion?
6. Where would you expect our short film to be shown?
7. What do you think of the pace of the film?
8. What is your opinion of our aspect ratio of 16:9 to 2.39:1?
9. What dialogue (if any) is needed to add to narrative?
10. Can you suggest any issues with lighting?

Audience Feedback 

Medal: Good range of shots

            Effective use of sound

Mission: Make narrative more clear, perhaps have more speech

              more shots of the antagonist

Medal: Good use of camera angles such as over the shoulder and establishing/ wide angled shots. 

Mission: Include some extreme close ups to show the protagonist's facial expressions.

              Have a clearer narrative. Level 3

Medal: Suspense built well

            Follows thriller conventions

Mission: Adjust brightness/contrast in premiere.

              More/clearer dialogue

              Move away from horror themes

Medal: Good camera shots

            Good use of lighting effect

Mission: make narrative more clear

              more dialogue

Medal: Really good camera work and good location used

Mission: I thought the music didn't relate to what was going on. I was also unsure of the

              genre. Level 3

Task 10: After Effects

As films conventionally include the studios logos before the film, we decided to create our own. To do this we used After Effects, which is industry-standard in creating logos and compositions. Despite practicing with After Effects in AS, we found it difficult to understand and it took a while to get some ideas created. We decided to add an animated background with text that transitioned in, as we felt this was the most aesthetically pleasing. After exporting we decided to import it into Premiere, where we added a sound effect. When this was finalised we added it to the beginning of our short film.

Task 10: Editing - Sound

As our production contained diegetic sound, we made sure that we used high quality equipment to record it. The JVC camera we used had an excellent microphone built in that was suitable.
However, even after this there was still unwanted audio in the shots, particularly the outside ones, such as the wind. There was no way I could have prevented this during the filming, however in Adobe Premiere I could add sound effects to remove the unwanted noise.

 I added a highpass filter to the outside shots so that the only sounds of a specific decibel reading can pass through. This meant that the sounds of the door opening was picked up but the wind in the background was not. As well as being more satisfying to listen too, it also helped each shot to flow, as the sound was consistent throughout, meaning that hopefully the continuous editing is unnoticeable.

We decided to overlap the audio slightly with the jump cut to emphasize the sudden change and to create tension. This was very subtle but we thought it looked a lot better than it did previously and helped the shots flow despite the jump.

After this I added soundtracks. Initially after adding the first soundtrack I felt that the ending was too abrupt. I tried to fade it out but it wasn't successful, so I decided to add an more ambient soundtrack to the end of it so that they overlapped seamlessly, and this also helped to build tension in the subsequent scene that showed the protagonist trying to find out what was outside.

Once we filmed the later parts of the film, I noticed for many of the scenes the sound was left ear only. This made it unpleasant to listen to so I decided to try and fix this in Premiere. I found out that there was an audio effect called 'fill left' which meant that the audio from the left ear was replicated on the right side. We applied this to all of the scenes.

Task 10: Editing - Colour Correction

As our film is a thriller, we felt that it's darker themes meant that the colours would have to suit it. We decided to reduce the intensity of the colour, as we wanted to emphasize the protagonist's emotions of both isolation and fear. We did this by adding... We also decided to increase the contrast, as we wanted the shadows to be more harsh to unnerve the viewer.

 Our film was filmed with a 16:9 aspect ratio, however after further research into the thriller genre, we found out that the conventional aspect ratio was an anamorphic 2.39:1. Therefore we decided to change it in post production.There is not a concrete method of changing aspect ratios in Premiere, but it can be done a variety of different ways. One method we looked at is cropping the video 12.5% on the top and bottom. Although this is easy to do and works effectively, it prevented us from framing the shot afterwards, and the head of the subject was often cut off. We decided to try a different method, which was to add two separate black colour matte's on the above video layers, This meant that the below layers weren't affected and, as a result, we could re-position the shot so that it contained the subject. Also, as this was in a separate layer, it could be dragged across the duration of the film, so it did not have to be repeated for each shot, which would have been the case for cropping.

Task 10: Editing - Cutting

We began by importing all of the clips into premiere pro and placed the clips we intended to use onto the timeline in chronological order. There was a lot of clips that were considered unusable, but some shots had multiple successes and therefore we had to choose the best one. We picked favourites and decided to keep the backups for later on in the editing stage when sound is added so that we can see which shot fits better. We then watched the clips through and used the razor tool to cut them appropriately. We had a couple of match on action shots that we needed to cut specifically to show that both shots are continuous and flow. There was one jump cut in our film and we wanted to emphasize this by slightly overlapping the sound, which is loud and keeps the viewer on edge. 

November feedback

Your web-log needs some attention as the last posts was 8th October.  Dkeep up the regular posts and esnure all reserach and planning is now published.

Your short film has a clear progression of shots and the bars are effective in giving it a cinematic look. Shots are of a good quality and framing and composition are proficient showing excellent technical skill in use of the camera. Audio has been considered and a JVC camera has been used which shows ambition and an ability to use a more advanced camera.

Music is appropriate and builds tension ass does the length of shots. Feedback may indicate that shots are lengthy but this suits the style of the short film.

Music is copyright free as it is sourced from Incomputech so make this clear in your web-log or put it in the credits.

Document your creative journey

I don't think you need to overdub sound but maybe add some ambient sounds or effects.

The narrative is clear. Make sure that the story is not cliched.  Be original and think of a twist at the end or defy expectations.  I am intrigued as to how you will resolve the narrative.  this is the key to level 4.

Task 10: Filming Day 2

For the second day of filming, we had to re-shoot the shots that were unusable on day 1. We started filming much earlier, which gave us much more time to prepare and ultimately film the scenes. This day was successful and we got a large portion of the filming done, however it began to rain and so we decided to stop shooting so that no equipment was damaged and also for continuity, as the rain would not have appeared earlier on in the film.

Task 10: Filming Day 1

We began filming using the JVC Camera. We used this because it had good automatic settings that would stay consistent from shot to shot, which is important for continuity. With continuity in mind, we noticed that the ovens had a time on them, and that it would change between shots. Fortunately, none of the shots in the storyboard required them to be in camera, and this problem did not trouble us. 

We decided to film near to sunset, as this had the most visually appealing lighting and helped to set the tone for the film, however an issue we had is that we began filming too late and so we only got to shot 8 before it started to get darker. We tried to avoid it being dark as it can cause lots of reflections, particularly as the set had lots of windows, and also we did not test how well the camera performs in low lighting conditions. 

This was the only issue we had with filming and everything else went as planned, so we are going to shoot again next week, after checking what footage is usable and what we need to re-shoot. We are going to start filming a lot earlier this time, so we have plenty of time to get the footage recorded.

Pitch Feedback

Your pitch was presented effectively using slides to outline ideas. You communicate well as a team and seem to have developed roles within the group.

I like the idea of an interrogation and it offers opportunities to explore lighting and mise en scene in a short scene. One concern was how this would be a short film  as it reflects the tropes of dram on TV. However, you explained how this would be overcome effectively.  Ideas such as use of colour sound interesting, make these clear.  Your answers revealed a depth of thought about the narrative which allayed any fears about the genre and medium.

Be realistic about where you film this. It is ambitious to use the library and keep e-mail communication to show planning. 

Why use a Go Pro?  Explain what different cameras bring to the style of the piece.

Can you publish a first draft of the script on the blog?

Comment on audience feedback received as part of the pitch. You will need this later for the evaluation.

Outline the roles allocated within the group.

Task 10: Recce

Below is a series of photographs taken prior to filming to get an idea of the location and to identify risks for the risk assessment. They also gave us a greater understanding of how we were going to frame our shots.

Task 10:Production Schedule

Monday, 28 September 2015

Production Schedule

DATE	TIME	SCENE	CHARACTER	DETAILS	LOCATION
02/10/2015	18:00	NONE	NONE	Set-Up	Protagonist’s house
	18:30	Radio	NONE	-	Kitchen
	19:00	Phone Call	Alton Keller (Reiss Hall) Vance (voice of	-	Kitchen
	19:30	Drink	Alton Keller (Reiss Hall)	Close-ups and Establishing shots.	Kitchen to Dining room
	20:00	Change in events	Alton Keller (Reiss Hall)	Triggered by outside stimulus	Outside/Garden
003/10/2015	18:00	NONE	NONE	Set-Up	Protagonist’s house
	18:30	Character Trauma	Alton Keller (Reiss Hall)	Canted angles/Fast cuts	Dining room
	19:00	Character goes upstairs	Alton Keller (Reiss Hall) Killer (Josh Wilcox)	-	Stairway
	19:30	Confrontation	Alton Keller (Reiss Hall) Killer (Josh Wilcox)	-	Second floor
	20:00	Police Phone Call	Alton Keller (Reiss Hall) Killer (Josh Wilcox)	-	Room on second floor
	20:30	Ending	Alton Keller (Reiss Hall) Killer (Josh Wilcox)	-	Second floor

Rutherford feedback

Thorough analysis of Lady Ga Ga videos.  Research is thorough and evidenced on the web-log. Thoughtful and perceptive.

Targets

• Ensure screenshots are used to illustrate the analyses.
• identify secondary sources in a bibliography post.
• Personalise the reserach by identfying influential short films and styles.
• Pick two film-makers such as Ramsay and Arnold to research.
• Identify codes and conventions of the short film.
• Waht is the purpose of a short film?
• Begin your planning and document on the web-log

Task 8: Pitch

 

Task 7 and Task 9: Role Allocation

ROLE	PERSON
Producer(s)	Sam Bowles Joe Hinton Connor Hanlon
Director	Joe Hinton
Cinematographer & Camera Operator	Joe Hinton
Script Writer	Connor Hanlon
Actor(s)	Reiss Hall Connor Hanlon
Editor(s)	Joe Hinton Sam Bowles
Production manager	Sam Bowles
Sound	Connor Hanlon

Task 6: Storyboard